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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Wed Sep 23, 2009 4:07 pm

So yea. I'm trying to do a manga, but everytime I finish a page, I don't wanna upload one o-o. And the wait for two would be ridiculously LONG. So, I'm writing it in a script form, with description and junk and talking and yea. Guess who the characters are? Us.

Cover: [Six girls laughing and on their way to school, walking together even though their age differences. Three are wearing the highschool uniform, a silvery and blue sailor suit, while the other three are wearing the middle school sailor suit of red and white.]

Title in prettyful purple font: Testing Elements.

[Cover picture shown again.]

Sarah: Then I said, that no ONE is more of a stalker then me and - -

Olivia: You ARE? I didn't notice!

Everyone: [Laughes.]

Justine: [Messes with ponytail] My hair is ALWAYS frizzy!

Amanda: Join the club!

Stephanie: Pah! I have some product I bought before school started that would fix it right up! Just if your allergic to blahblahblahblahblahblahblahblah it won't work.

Beth: I think your hair looks fine Juu!

Justine: [Gives Beth a shocked face] You're kidding RIGHT? And PLEASE do not call me that? It sounds like Jew and I'm not so - -

Olivia: [Rolls eyes] Fiiiine Vincy.

Justine: That either.

Amanda: [Sniffle sniffle] Why don't I get a funny nickname?

Sarah: [sighes] . . . It's not funny, it's Mandy.

Amanda: I'm not funny?!

Stephanie: Oh, also if you're allergic to --

Amanda: [Wide eyes] I'm NOT funny!?

Olivia: Oh just shut up. [Rubs eyes] I woke up late and - -

Amanda: Well! Middle School drop off AWAY~ [Runs away from the group up the stairs of the middle school.]

Stephanie: Well isn't that adorable. [Rolls eyes] Cya guys. We'll make sure she doesn't run into a wall.. [Grabs Beth's arm and begins to walk off towards Amanda]

Beth: Aye! I'm not some sort of dog!

Stephanie: Isn't 'Aye' what pirates say?

Beth: Nah, they say 'Arg! Matey!'

Stephanie: No, English say --

Beth: Oh common! [They run off]

Middle School: [Pool gets odd waves randomly]

Sarah: [Sighs] I wish I could run into school like that.

Olivia: Maybe because we have lives out of - -

Justine: [Elbows Olivia in the middle of the sentence]

Sound box/ picture: OW! [Shows the elbow and action lines hitting Olivia's side]

Justine: Liv, be nice. We don't have lives outta school, but you don't need to point it out!

Sarah: Maybe you guys don't but - - -

Olivia: Here we go!

Justine: Let's here about your plan to - -

Sarah: WELL! At least my hair isn't digusting and I am not so grumpy!

Olivia/Justine: [Sighes] Are you feeling P--

Sarah: Yes. [Sniffles and looks down at feet.]

Justine: [Hugs] FORGIVEN!

The three girls continued their walk to the high school.

Part one: Complete~
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Post  Scooby-Doo on Wed Sep 23, 2009 5:08 pm

Anime_Amanda_ wrote:Stephanie: Well isn't that adorable. [Rolls eyes] Cya guys. We'll make sure she doesn't run into a wall.. [Grabs Beth's arm and begins to walk off towards Amanda]

Beth: Aye! I'm not some sort of dog!

Stephanie: Isn't 'Aye' what pirates say?

Beth: Nah, they say 'Arg! Matey!'

Stephanie: No, English say --

Beth: Oh common! [They run off]

I laughed.
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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Wed Sep 23, 2009 7:45 pm

I put that in just because. I needed something for you to say in shock, but not 'Oi!' so I went with Aye XD
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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:19 pm

I HAD AN ENTIRE PART WROTE OUT.

THEN MY COMPUTER DID SOMETHING AND I LOST IT DX
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Post  Cantaloupe on Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:07 pm

Darn.
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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:45 pm

DX I was writing the last setence of the part.
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Post  Scooby-Doo on Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:54 pm

Type it in Word first and CONSTANTLY save.
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Post  LaBohemien on Thu Sep 24, 2009 10:04 pm

That's what I do.


Every paragraph I save. More, if possible.
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