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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Fri Jan 29, 2010 9:03 pm

I'm in a writing ditch, I'll just post random stuff here for some feedback.

He sat in the dead center of a ring of waxy, lit candles. The flames of at least twenty candles danced through the darkness of the hut we sat in. I watched the shadows run across his face, the flames flickering below him illuminating his face eerily. The man’s dark brown-black eyes seemed to reflect every flame’s glittering appear, shooting them back at me. His cheeks had speckles of dirt on them, filling in any wrinkles, if any, of his tan face. I squinted at him; with the lighting and the dirt I couldn’t tell you if he was 18 or 80. Finally, I met his eyes directly. As soon as I did I could see the mischievous glint in them, I was narrowing his age.

The ominous man’s black hair was spiky, and parts of it covered his left eye, symmetrically cutting the view of half of it. Below his nose was covered by a piece of black fabric which connected to the rest of his ninja like attire. My entire body stiffened as he leaned over and blew out every candle. I couldn’t have told if he was gone, or if he was in front of me. I heard a calm, wise voice speak after what seemed a life time of the darkness.

“Are you ready?”
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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:09 pm

Beauty

Fire is destructive,
Yet it clears the land for new,
But at the same time,
Fire is beauty.
The flames dance,
The colors of reds and blues,
So is beauty destruction?
Do we fight over it?
Destruction isn’t beauty…
Yet beauty is destruction?

Beauty gives people jobs,
Yet makes others feel bleak.
Destruction isn’t beautiful,
Nor is it weak.
Beauty is gawked at,
But at the same time,
It causes division in schools,
For ‘popular’ and ‘not’
So beauty is destruction
But sometimes it's not?

Yet destruction is not beautiful.
But beauty is art,
Like a canvas's vibrant colors.
Beauty gives life,
To a boring and unknown,
It fills life with color,
and gives those with doubt,
Hope.

It has two sides like the fire,
Good and bad,
So is that the same for everyone and thing?
A bit of both?
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Post  Anime_Amanda_ on Tue Feb 02, 2010 8:52 pm

Any feedback on the first entry?

I know I'm whining about it but D8
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