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Of Candles and Fire.

Post  CherrySama on Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:41 pm

Fire.
A curse and blessing of the Earth.
A curse that destroys homes, burns millions of achres, (Sp XD) kills thousands.
A blessing that that clears the land for life to begin and grow again.
Life begins and ends with fire.
This is a force that definetely should be reckoned with.
"But yet...." thought the young girl to herself. "It seems so gentle, and harmless right here..."
A girl of about 11 years was gazing out at a cream colored lighted candle, giving off a scent of vanilla which was filling the room.
"But than again," began the young girl again to herself "A candle isn't exactly fire, is it? It's controlled, and small. And it could go out at anytime."
Just like the young girl.
Kristina Rose when she was young, was diagonoised with a disease, unknown by doctors. Though unkown to them, the disease seems to weaken her immune system, leaving her sick often and weak.
But the docotors had recently found out about something. This strange illness she had could actually kill her. It could happen at anytime to a few days or even years.

Yes, Kristina was just like a candle. A candle that was about to go out.
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Post  CherrySama on Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:42 pm

XD I have no idea of where I'm going to go with this.
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Post  Sere on Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:42 pm

Pretty story. Wish you would post more though, right now its very philosophical.
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Post  CherrySama on Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:45 pm

Thank you! Very Happy I don't think it's that good, but I'll continue it. ^^
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Post  Scooby-Doo on Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:50 pm

I luves it already. <3

Continue, please. :3 Also, write the stuff in word, just incase your internet goes out on you or something while you're writing or something. 3:
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Post  CherrySama on Mon Dec 15, 2008 11:18 pm

Thank you Lav. Very Happy Glad you like it so far. ^^
And yeah, you're right. I'll continue it on Word.
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Post  CherrySama on Wed Dec 17, 2008 1:15 am

Along with her illness, Kristina was different from most kids. The kids she had met before anyway. She was home-schooled, and was naturally and generally raised to be a quiet, polite child. Not that she needed to be raised that way. Kristina was like that naturally. She was quiet, and prefered not to socialize with her kind.
A few years ago, her parents had tried to send her to school again.
Just a few days were enough for her. She just did not feel comfortable around her fellow kind, and they did not accept her weak body and her quiet, almost silent state of mind.
The reason why she was so quiet around her peers was because she did not find them interesting. And she had plenty of friends already anyway. There was Vivian, her best friend, who was kind and compassionated. Kristina had spent many hours talking with her. And there was Ralph, tall and brave who was already there for her. And many more friends besides them.
With all of these friends she had, who would want real friends anyway?
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Post  CherrySama on Wed Dec 17, 2008 1:15 am

(EWWW IT'S BAD. DX)
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Post  3lroy on Wed Dec 17, 2008 7:30 pm

Not at all, continue.
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Post  Sere on Wed Dec 17, 2008 9:14 pm

Its nice. I want to see what happens to her
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